Finally, here is the translation for the original comic of mine named "Nieboskłon".
I find it kinda tricky to translate its title from my native language but i hope this, more or less accurate, equivalent will work as well c:
I drew it about 6 months ago for a contest held by a local manga publisher c: Now i decided to redraw the story since its main problem was the 8 page limitation (required for the contest) and then i want to draw its continuation.
That's why i'd love to hear your critique and suggestions about the story/drawings etc. as i believe it'll help me with the further development of this comic c: Thank you in advance!
PS: Since i'm not an English native, my amateurish translation probably contains some errors. I'd be gratefu if you could point them out C: anyway hope the comic is at least comprehensible^^'[PL]
polska wersja językowa dostępna tutaj: fav.me/d97w3sp